The book starts out in Summer. It is moving day for the Maxum family and it is not going well. Everyone is overwhelmed and they all need a time out. A new friendship begins on this day that will last a lifetime.
I focus a lot on Larry, one of the older children in this book. He has some anger issues. How does he learn from his outbursts of anger? Can he learn to change his attitude?
The kids are encouraged to pull pranks by one set of parents. The other parents are divided in the wisdom of pranks that are supervised and where safety is the major issue. They all learn there are consequences to pulling pranks on each other.
There is fund raising for the East Side Soup Kitchen. How good can actually come out of a bad situation.
Of course there is wedding - I don't think I can write a book that doesn't have a love story in it!
There are vacations in Montana. My husband and I traveled to Montana this past year to gather information for this book. The people we met were kind and helpful and even allowed me to put them in the book. Some of the book is set in Traverse City, Michigan. One of our favorite vacation spots. One of the children wants to work there over the summer. But she needs to learn what it means to have good work ethics before permission is granted.
I hope you will love this book as much as I loved writing it. I am in the last phase of editing and have really enjoyed getting to know these characters. Watch for the announcement of publishing. I can't wait!
Chapter 1
Amanda
yelled down from the top railing of the gleaming oak staircase, "Mom,
where are the boxes from my bedroom?" Her mom was in the kitchen in the
back of the new house. With the
dishwasher running she couldn't hear her daughter.
Amanda
screamed louder, "Mom!" Still
no answer. She stomped angrily down the stairs, stopping at the landing to yell
again. This time with all the pent up anger she felt about moving, she shouted,
"Mother, where are my belongings?"
Without
waiting for an answer she turned on the landing and ran down the last set of
stairs to the entry hall. She randomly started opening boxes and as she
rummaged through them, the contents began spilling out onto the floor. Her mom
had heard the last yell and as she walked into the long entry hall to see what
was wrong. When she saw the mess Amanda
was making she gasped, "What are you doing, Amanda Jane? Don't start
pulling things out of boxes right here in the front hall."
Tempers
were short. Moving day was taking its toll. Mrs. Maxum stopped to regain her
composure. She stared out the front door
and started thinking about the move. When
their fifth child, Timmy, was born it was evident they would have to find a
larger home. The only other boy, the
oldest, Larry was sleeping in a room no bigger than a closet. The three girls, Amanda, Clare and Joanna
were crammed into the largest bedroom which had no place to put a crib. Timmy had been sleeping at the end of the
hallway.
Mr.
and Mrs. Maxum had talked for a long time about this being the right time to
make a change in their lives. They could
live anywhere in the Great Lakes Bay Region.
They decided to choose from the three larger communities: Saginaw, Bay
City or Midland. Mr. Maxum was a teacher at Delta College just fifteen minutes
away from each of the main cities.
Mrs.
Maxum was startled out of her reminiscing when Amanda started crying desperately
as she whined, "I want to find the boxes for my room. I NEED to find my journal." She ended almost in a whisper, "It's a
matter of life or death."
Upstairs
in the nursery, the baby started crying. Amanda's mom sighed. She was tired and cranky and just didn't have
time for drama. She pleaded, "Please Amanda, go get Timmy, change his
diaper and then bring him down to feed him some cereal." Amanda glared at
her mother as she stomped back up the stairs grumbling to herself, "Oh
sure, Timmy, Timmy, Timmy, it is always Timmy." He was the stupid reason
they had to move. As she walked down the long upstairs hallway to her brother's
room, tears began to run down her cheeks.
She hated this move.
Amanda had loved her old home. She had a gazillion friends. She could run the neighborhood for hours using all the shortcuts through the blocks. This new house meant a new school filled with strangers instead of friends. She felt stranded in the house because she didn't even know where she was, afraid she would get lost if she ventured outside.
The
front screen door slammed behind six year old Joanna. She ran into the house,
out of breath. JoJo, as everyone called her, took a deep gulp of air and
exclaimed excitedly, "Mommy, we're here with more boxes!" She loved
moving day. It was such an exciting time.
Her
mom's voice sounded like she was going to cry when she said, "Go tell
Daddy I need help in here before he brings another box into this house."
Then as she began picking up the items and putting them back into the correct
boxes. She added her own touch of drama
as she yelled over her shoulder, "Tell him, I am about to have a nervous
breakdown."
Amanda
descended the back stairway that went right to the kitchen. She put Timmy in his high chair. When she tossed a handful of Cheerios on his
tray she felt something wet on her toes. She looked over by the sink and
screamed, "Aaahhh. Mom, the dishwasher's leaking!" Timmy jumped when
she screamed and he started crying.
Noreen
ran into the kitchen, right past the startled baby to go down the stairs to the
basement to turn off the water supply. Talking to herself in a disgusted tone
she said, "Oh for goodness sake, why didn't I pay attention to where the
water shutoff was before we moved in?"
After she finally located the pipes, she turned the faucet off. She ran
back up the stairs yelling, "Amanda, don't just stand there grab some
towels and help me clean this water up."
There
was an angry outburst coming from the bathroom, next to the kitchen. Larry,
came out of the bathroom with shampoo dripping from his hair and just a towel
around his waist. He exclaimed, "What kind of house did you buy? The water
just stopped coming out of the faucet and I still have shampoo in my hair."
JoJo
ran back out onto the porch yelling loudly, "Daddy come quick. Mommy is having another nervous
breakdown." But she couldn't see her Daddy because he was in the garage getting
the handcart. A pretty lady, someone JoJo
didn't know, was walking up the stairs to the front porch. She was holding a
big plate of chocolate chip cookies in her hands. She laughed as she said,
"Well Little Miss, I think you better take me to your mother. I can give her chocolate, it cures a nervous
breakdown every time." As she eyed the plate of cookies, JoJo asked the
stranger, "Can I have a nervous breakdown, too?" The pretty lady
laughed as she handed Joanna a cookie and said, "You don't need to have a
nervous breakdown to get a cookie, you’re so cute you get one without all the
drama."
"Joanna,
who is your new friend?" her daddy yelled over his shoulder as he carried the
handcart to the van where he picked up another box to take into the house. He
walked over to the porch and the lady introduced herself, " I'm Sissy
Castor, I live next door. He said, "Glad to meet you, I'm Sean Maxum. Come
in and meet my wife." They walked through the house into the kitchen. On
his way he called out, "Noreen, we have a visitor. This is Sissy Castor.
She lives next door and she brought us cookies."
Noreen
was mortified. She peered up from the floor where she was wiping up the water. She stared at the woman entering the kitchen
with her husband. She looked perfect.
Perfect hair. Perfect nails. Even perfect chocolate chip cookies. All of a
sudden, JoJo noticed the big cardboard box in her dad's hands and exclaimed,
"Ooh Daddy, Mama is having a nervous breakdown, no more boxes allowed!"
Noreen
self consciously patted her hair as she stood up. She wiped her sopping wet
hands on her jeans and extended her hand for a welcoming handshake. With a shy smile said, "Oh my goodness,
those look wonderful. I'm Noreen Maxum and I really am having a nervous
breakdown." Sissy took in the wet floor, the four children, which included
the dripping teenager in a towel, and boxes piled high on every flat surface.
She cheerfully answered, "Of course you are, it's moving day."
Sissy
helped clean up the water from the dishwasher.
She poured two cups of coffee from the coffeemaker on the counter. Sean
told Noreen to take a break. He offered
to look at the dishwasher and watch Timmy.
Sissy agreed whith her new neighbor and directed Noreen to the front
porch. They sat on the stairs drinking
coffee and eating chocolate chip cookies for a much deserved break. Within
minutes they were friends, laughing, sharing chocolate and moving day disaster
stories.
Sissy
asked, "How many children do you and Sean have?" Noreen looked at her and felt the hairs on
the back of her neck stand up. She was
used to people making comments about their big family and she usually expected
it. She just hadn't expected it today. She firmly announced, "Larry, the wet
one from the shower, is a senior in high school. Amanda, whom I am sure you
heard screaming in the kitchen, is a sophomore.
Clare is in her bedroom, decorating her side of the room. She is in fifth grade. You met sweet Joanna, lovingly called
JoJo! She will begin first grade this
fall and is the one Clare is trying to keep out of her side of the room. The reason we moved is our darling baby Timmy
actually needed a bedroom, he is almost a year old.
Sissy
laughed out loud. She saw the startled
look on Noreen's face and quickly explained, "I was worried I was going to
have to bribe the new neighbors to not move right back out when they met our
family. William and I have six
children. And I think that maybe they
all are about the right ages to become best friends with yours. Jerry is a senior. Sarah and Julie are twins going into
Sophomore year. Liz is in sixth grade
and Mary in 5th. Our youngest, Timmy, is
going into first grade. Having you as
neighbors is going to be so much fun!"
Sissy
asked why they moved to Saginaw from Bay City.
Noreen explained she had been looking forward to the possibility of
moving back to her hometown. After looking at several houses, the one they
found on Hoyt Street was a dream. It was a beautiful brick home with six
bedrooms and four bathrooms. It had a
huge front porch and a great backyard. A
bonus was that it was only three blocks from the Cathedral where they would go
to church and the children could go to school.
Sissy stayed on the front porch a bit longer, but then heard Mary calling for her
next door. She told her new friend that
she would come help her unpack boxes after lunch and walked back home.
Noreen
started thinking again about the decision to move. She and Sean prayed about this decision.
Neither of them heard or felt any guidance from God. After several days Noreen
said, "William, I think if we go ahead with the move and everything works
out okay, then we can assume we are on the right path. We asked, we listened,
and neither of us were told not to do it."
Once
the house was found, Noreen and Sean decided to have special time with each of
the children. That meant one by one each child would go out with them to the
park behind their Bay City house to talk. They would listen to each child
before making a final decision.
At
first, Larry had been angry about the move. It was going to be difficult going
to a new school for his senior year. Larry wanted to be a veterinarian. His
father's sister, Aunt Nancy, was a vet in Saginaw. When she heard they might
move to Saginaw, she offered Larry a job. That clinched it for him, now he was
all for the move.
Amanda
was going to be a sophomore. She hated the thought of moving. She was a
cheerleader. She was on the volleyball team. She had several babysitting jobs. Her
best friend lived just down the block. Her parents told her that she could join all
the teams she wanted in Saginaw. She would always have her Bay City friends and
could make new friends in Saginaw. Amanda told her parents, "I know you
really don't care, but you are ruining my life."
It
was Clare who really didn't care. She said she did, and she acted like she did,
however she really didn’t care. Clare decided
that if Amanda was against this move then so was she. Her parents told her that
wasn't a good reason to give them for why she didn't want to move. That was just
showing loyalty to her sister. While being an admirable thing to do, it wasn't
going to persuade her parents. Clare whispered to her mom, "I really don't
care if we move, it might be fun."
JoJo
loved change. She couldn't wait to be the new girl in school. She asked if she
could take gymnastic and dance lessons in Saginaw. Her mother assured her that
could happen. JoJo was all for this move. She never had a friend in the
neighborhood and she pleaded with her parents to find her a new friend right
next door to the new house.
Sweet
baby Timmy would be happy no matter where they lived.
Noreen
laughed as she recounted the first time they went to see the house there were lots
of kids playing next door in the front yard. How she thought their family would
fit right in with so many families in the neighborhood.They didn't know those
kids were all one family!
Noreen
thought how nice it would be to have another big family right next door. One of the reason's they chose this
neighborhood was to have their children be able to walk to St. Mary Cathedral
school. The Castor and Maxum children
could walk to school together. She
prayed that Sissy's words about the children all getting along would go from
her mouth to God's ears.
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